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Interesting idea. I like the concept, and I applaud anyone who looks to "old" Ravenloft for inspiration.

The only question I would have is how she is able to work against Strahd. His other "brides" are vampire spawns, so I assume that's what your Patrina is as well (hence her desire to become a "full" vampire). I would think that any spawn of Strahd's would be devoted to protecting him (as his other 3 brides are) and probably of limited independence. In addition, Strahd is probably aware of her actions (and maybe even her thoughts) at almost all times.

What happened to her that let her think independently? A magical accident? A deal with the Dark Powers? Maybe a close encounter with an interesting magic item (that the players may need to find)?

Also, is Strahd still psychically connected to her? Giving her the psionic powers creates an interesting twist. Perhaps she is constantly struggling to block him from getting into her head so she can plot against him.

I think you have a really interesting villain here with the potential for a deep (maybe even redemptive) story.

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